Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowedays
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Nowadays
, many developed
countries
attracting
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overseas
professionals
, For those
countries
, it is extremely
benefitial
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beneficial
to have doctors or engineers with vast experience in their society.
Thus
, more people are questioning whether the
professionals
shall
server
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their nations before
traveling
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out, or
they
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whether they
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have the right to move out freely despite the cost paid by their
home
country
. In
this
essay, I will discuss both views and deliver my personal thoughts at the end. Some voices have asked the governments to stop
professionals
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migration as they have to serve their
home
country
before leaving it.
This
point of view is based on
that
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fact that the
country
where a professional has learned or trained, spent a considerable amount of money and contributed
in
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their degree to some extent. And
as a
result
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they shall pay back by working in
the
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home
countries
for
few
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a few
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years before they are allowed to move abroad and
looking
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for own their benefits.
On the other hand
. no one can deny the contribution of the
home
country
and its society
in
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the education experience of the
profissionals
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professionals
.
However
, these students spent their entire college life between
book
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books
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, articles and libraries.
in addition
, they have invested all of their money in
tuitions
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and
univesities
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universities
other fees. So it will be unfair to push them
stay
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in a
country
that they want to leave looking for a better opportunity. In conclusion. While
countries
have the power to impose travel restrictions
to
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professionals
, it will be unfair to
blocking
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them seek
better
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a better
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future
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futures
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and life
experience
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experiences
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.
Accordingly
, I stand with the idea of letting people travel freely without restrictions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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