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News media is important in our society. Why is it so important? Do you think its influence is generally positive or negative?

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It is believed that any form of
media
, whether mass or local,is supposed to play a vital
role
 within the body of society.the main reason for
this
 can root in the idea of being informative and I am of the idea that
this
 is beneficial for any society. Spreading awareness could be named as the main responsibility of any form of
media
,
that is
,
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if that source is reliable and honest of course.to illustrate,since the old times,
this
 source has been what
people
 can relate on regarding being informed about major and minor happenings of their country or even smaller scales.to exemplify ,newspapers and well-known
news
 agencies had the act of notifying
people
 about what has been going on in their public.later,
this
role
 was given to television and nowadays The Internet is seen as the main source of Being updated and
awared
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aware
awarded
. It seems hard to deny the crucial
role
 of
media
 in any form of
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 nowadays, whether honest or against that.if being honest is seen as the bedrock of broadcasting
news
,with the existence of the Internet nowadays,and a wide range of pages ,ranging from common individuals to specialist journalists,distinguishing truth from fraud can not be demanding work.that aside,
news
media
 sources can be used as a tool for saving
people
 through hard times.take the tsunami of 2009 in Japan as a remarkable example,before the catastrophe took place , with the help of
news
 agencies,
people
 evacuated the city,
thus
 ,saving millions. In a way of conclusion,
media
 as an educative and aiding tool plays an undeniable
role
 in the world living in today.and , providing being honest it is an absolutely helpful being.
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