I am writing to you because I am unable to pay next month's rent which is due on Monday. Unfortunately, the other day, I lost my wallet in which there was a large amount of money. I have, therefore, had to ask my parents to deposit money into my account. Since the financial transaction is a time-consuming process, I will pay your rent upon receiving the money. I am so sorry for any inconvenience to have caused you.

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I am writing to you because I am unable to pay

month's

rent

which is due on Monday. Unfortunately, the other day, I lost my wallet in which there was a large amount of

money

. I have,

therefore

, had to ask my parents to deposit

money

into my account. Since the financial transaction is a time-consuming process, I will pay your

rent

upon receiving the

money

. I am so sorry for any inconvenience to have caused you. There are

also

some problems with the flat that I wish to grab your attention. I am anxious to know whether there are any places left. The citizens are encouraged to exchange their assets for dollars or gold by opposition groups; It may help them to keep the value of their capital.I am writing to you because I cannot pay

month's

rent

due on Monday. Unfortunately, the other day, I lost my wallet with a large amount of

money

. I have,

therefore

, had to ask my parents to deposit

money

into my account. Since the financial transaction is time-consuming, I will pay your

rent

upon receiving the

money

. I am so sorry for any inconvenience to have caused you. There are

also

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

250 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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