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In some contries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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In some societies, individuals prefer to own an apartment or a
house
 more than
spending
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 money for renting one . As a suitable reason, having a
house
 is a kind of investment for those who can afford to buy one . From my point of view, in spite of having many
advanteges
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advantages
 for all people
such
 as trying to save much more money, it is capable of
dissapointing
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disappointing
ones
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those
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 who are going to marry.
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,
az
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as
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 a trend in specially upgraded societies ,buying a building is a method to invest, owing to the increasing price of
constructions
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.
In addition
, people are able to secure their life because the buildings can be sold whenever the owner needs money.
Moreover
, when someone proceeds to
perchace
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purchase
a
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new
accomodation
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accommodation
, there is no need to spend some of the
sallary
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salary
 each
mounth
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month
.
As a result
, the
mounthly
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monthly
 income will be assumed for alternative needs
such
 as
cuisins
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cuisine
cuisines
 or clothes ,etc. As another advantage in
this
 issue, constructions will be repaired or even redesigned by the owner's appetite.
For instance
, in many countries , renters are not allowed to alter the interior decoration without the owners'
permittion
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permission
.
On the other hand
, despite positive items which owing an apartment or a
house
 caused,
that is
 a huge burden for
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a new
the new
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new
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 married
couple
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couples
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.
In other words
, ordinary young individuals find it difficult to save
huge
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amount
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amounts
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 of finance while they have financial problems due to a part-time occupation with low paid wages .
Furthermore
, sometimes it is beneficial to rent a
house
.
Thus
, by consuming less
renting
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peyment
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payments
, everyone is able to spend the rest of
finance
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their finance
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 to save or
satisfiy
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satisfy
 in other issues. To give an illustration, in many countries investing
on
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 houses is not logical as
the
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a
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 balanced economy .
Hence
,the citizens rather live in rented buildings. To conclude, there is a rational argument between two sides of citizens about whether
perchasing
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purchasing
accomodations
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accommodations
accommodation
 have merits or not. In my opinion, to some
extend
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 it is purposive . Thinking economically ,a lot of people prefer to invest
on
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in
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domain
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a domain
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 or flat
as a result
 of increasing prices. According to the opposing view, In many nations ,It is not affordable for young couples to have a construction in the initiation of marriage.
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