In many parts of the world, it is common for one parent to stay at home and raise a new born child while the other works full-time to earn money. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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one

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always

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at

home

and look after their

new born

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child and

other

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works

fulltime

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and earn cash. I think there are many positive aspects over the drawback.

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future for their children.

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Children

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nutrition

, health, and education.

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new research was showing feeding with

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breast milk improved

babies

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nutrition

.

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child

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mother decided

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at

home

. Because if the babies have good

nutrition

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illness.

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day's

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we can see many

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nutrition

babies all over the world

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in

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developing countries,

such

as Sri Lanka. Because of inflation works essential for

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both guardians.

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, they can teach them good

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well-being human for

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society.

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, there are many

disadvantage

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for the

guardian

who

think

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staying at

home

and

raise

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raising

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their

new born

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child

.

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Firstly

, they are unstable

with

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financially

and

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lead to more problem.

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,

one

guardian

has to work many hours

for

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cover expenses,

then

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with

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under pressure and without any relaxation

possible

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have

mental

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disorder,

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as

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depression.

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has been losing

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workforce. In conclusion, if

one

guardian

staying

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at

home

and raise

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a new

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new born

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newborn

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baby and other work and gain money lead to more benefit

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than

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then

outweigh the drawback.