Some people believe that if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A number of

people

argue that if a

police

officer has a

gun

,

this

might cause

a

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violence

more than necessary. Despite

this

opinion, it seems to me that carrying weapons by

police

is one of the most important ways to deal with crimes.

To begin

with, the

police

have to prevent society from different convicts by using various tools.

In other words

, citizens should know that if they encounter any trouble,

police

could help them vary of methods

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guns

. To illustrate, an ordinary person who faces a kidnapping or a branch of a bank which suffers from robbery needs help from authorized forces which have adequate ways for seizing the offenders.

Therefore

, the

police

definitely should carry

guns

to rescue the community from

people

who try to harm citizens with different weapons.

On the other hand

, some countries have suffered from

violence

caused by

police

forces who have

guns

. In fact, society has been living some specific

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complaints about

police

's unnecessary weapon usage which leads to some strikes constantly. To demonstrate, when the

police

use the

gun

against relatively little crimes

such

as stealing a product, it causes rebellion among the

people

naturally. These kinds of usages not only do trigger other

violences

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violence

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like strikes, vary of turmoils and at the final stage may be looting, but

also

they

affects

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community's

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trusts

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to

police

as well as the government adversely.

Nevertheless

, by considering these examples should not be prohibited

carrying

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by

police

,

instead

of

this

officers have to be educated by the government to boost their awareness. To conclude,

although

a part of society

allege

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that if the

police

have

gun

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,

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of

violence

rise, I do not

agree

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this

idea because in my main opinion problem of

violence

does not originate from carrying weapons by

police

. I believe that the main issue is using

guns

under

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unnecessary conditions by

police

due to

lack

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of education. The

police

should carry

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a weapon

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weapon

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weapons

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to protect

people

from convicts, but

also

should be well educated.