Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologies describe what action you will take

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Dear Mike, Good day, hope you are doing well. I am writing to explain the reasons behind the roar which is happening in my flat. I am just residing next to your flat, and we have recently bought

this

flat indeed. So, after purchasing

this

flat we identified the flooring tiles and wooden furniture

are

Wrong verb form

were

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not

good

Rephrase

as good

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as we expected. So, we decided to renovate the existing infrastructure which we have. You know, during the maintenance activity, a lot of noise will be produced which will lead to some disturbance to the peers. I am extremely sorry for your inconvenience

due to

this

work, and as per the schedule, the activity will be accomplished by next week.

Moreover

, the vendor is trying to neutralize the turbulence level

while

using sound absorbers, which will alleviate the machine noise level to a minimum , and we will always try to keep

this

situation under control. Hope you will consider

this

, and I will look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Ravi

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task response

Ensure that the response fully addresses all parts of the task prompt, including a clear explanation of the reasons for the noise and a specific plan of action to address the issue.

coherence and cohesion

Organize the ideas in a more coherent manner, with clear linking words and logical progression of information. Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

170 words

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