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Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer?

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Family members have been facing emotional and physical distance despite the blood relativity and genetic connections, which can possibly constitute an effect on the
member
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 social and communication skills.
However
, in
this
 essay, I will illustrate the possible causes of
this
 issue and find a suitable solution to solve the problem as well.
Firstly
, parents are the most responsible for creating a warm and loving atmosphere in the house, it is basically their function. Uneducated parents could possibly be clueless about the significance and value of family communication;
therefore
, they will pass
this
 method on to their children.
On the other hand
, some children grew up in a household where they overestimate the concept of family gatherings, but they were separated for certain circumstances
such
 as job opportunities or college. In fact, special memories are what keep
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family members connected and inseparable.
However
, creating new annual traditions for the family will perhaps improve their emotional connection. Or sharing a meal together once in a while will surely help as well.
Nevertheless
, several families are separated for serious problems,
for example
, personal trauma, emotional and physical abuse and social anxiety, in
this
 case, they should consider therapy sessions or
talking
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 to someone who is
professional
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 mental health. In conclusion, permanent communications with your family are important, even the prophet Mohammad emphasized the importance of family reunion,
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 is why we should try to make an effort in order to build healthy relationships with our family members despite our disagreement.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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