Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the health care system , the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing. What are the potential reasons for this and what are the some the long-trrm effects?

The unprecedented progress of society brings along several notable notions which are interconvertible . Among them, the rising tendency of

health

care is one of them. So many reasons behind

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, that government worked hard to improve

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lifestyle

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of

people

's

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declined.

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,

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will discuss the reasons

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development. The

first

aspect to out in

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context is that individual's eating

habit

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they eat junk foods daily which is

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their stomach. Let us start by considering the fact, nowadays due to

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some

people

doesn't

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make food at home so they prefer restaurants. It is indeed, a

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fact that

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children

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want to eat green vegetables.

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, A balanced diet is the secret

of

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a healthy body.

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, many

people

nowadays rely on fast food containing excessive fat and sugar . They cause obesity, diabetes and heart

diseases

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. In order words,

overweight

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being overweight

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is a serious problem the world over,lately,especially in developed countries.

For instance

,

people

now lead a sedentary lifestyle,

doind

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doing

desk jobs, watching television or playing video games for long hours .

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leads to obesity and ill

health

. Regular exercise is vital in maintaining

health

. Exercise burns calories and builds healthy

bons

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bones

and muscles.

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, due to

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behaviour of

masses

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government failed to maintain

thier

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their

health

. In conclusion, according to the argument

of

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aforementioned above, one can reach

to

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a

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conclusion that the benefit of eating fast food for

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and lack of time are instrumental indeed.

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,

it's

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potential drawback should not be overlooked either.