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In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. do this development have more adavantages or disadvantages?

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As our universe is becoming increasingly associated with technology, some agencies and companies are now more willing to apply the idea of replacing humans with
robots
 in several jobs.
Robots
 are expected to do more work than human
workers
 soon.
Although
this
 trend has certain features, I believe the disadvantages are greater. There are several advantages of using automatons as a major source of labour. One of them is reducing the rate of errors that humans usually do.
Robots
 are machines with special designs and software, which help them do many missions with the minimum possible mistakes.
Moreover
, they
also
 can be used for a long time compared to employees who usually work for specific hours. Another benefit of substituting
workers
 with
robots
 is that business leaders will save a lot of money in the long term by getting rid of the salaries of their
workers
.
Although
 all these advantages must be acknowledged, they are overweighed by the downsides. In terms of disadvantages, even though
robots
 seem more effective, humans’ creativity is irreplaceable. There are important things that
robots
 cannot do
such
 as communicating and solving complicated problems. From an economic perspective,
first
, human being employees will suffer more and more from lacking career opportunities, and
this
 will affect their financial situation badly, which
also
 reflects on the global economic situation.
Second
, the cost of making or buying even repairing
robots
 is huge, and many companies and industries cannot afford it.
Thus
, using more automatons in the future will lead people to lose their source of sustenance. In conclusion, some employers may benefit from introducing more
robots
instead
 of humans in the becoming years. Human being
workers
,
however
, will be negatively affected for sure. I still believe that the drawbacks are greater, and governments should ensure that steps are taken to prevent
this
 phenomenon.
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