Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a nations success, while other think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a nations success. What are these factors? Which of all factors, do you think are most important?

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Nowadays, nature is badly affected by
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rapid growth in the production of
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of items which are available for the usage of people. In
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both reasons and solutions followed by a conclusion will be discussed.
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with, numerous factors are responsible for the damage
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environment
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the environment
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is increasing dramatically at an alarming rate due to which high demand of products
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needed to
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their demands.
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, industries are developed so that
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a bulk amount
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could be manufactured,
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, these factories
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smoke and waste material which affects the atmosphere.
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, people met to various health diseases like asthma,
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problems because of polluted air.
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,
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consumer's
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goods
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responsible. Moving
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, some measures can be taken to resolve
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method
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should be used, and plastic should be forbidden. Only those products,
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and cans
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which can be gone under the process of
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and used ahead should be produced.
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, plastic bottles and polythene can be completely restricted because they are never decomposed and
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harmful for the animals as well as for God's beautiful creation.
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, carry bags made up of paper can be brought up in use.
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, these steps can be taken
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forward to save the beauty of nature. In conclusion,
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some components are considered which are accountable to ruin the natural world
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there are
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