Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a nations success, while other think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a nations success. What are these factors? Which of all factors, do you think are most important?
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To begin
with, numerous factors are responsible for the damage of
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the environment
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items
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, these factories releases
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, some measures can be taken to resolve this
problem. To illustrate it, recycling
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the recycling
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methods
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, plastic bottles and polythene can be completely restricted because they are never decomposed and also
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, carry bags made up of paper can be brought up in use. Therefore
, these steps can be taken step
forward to save the beauty of nature.
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