World would be a better place if women own the leadership. Do you agree or disagree with statement?

Numerous components are responsible for the progress of a

nation

. Some

people

consider that the one and only

one

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method for measuring the

country

's success is

the

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economic growth, while others argue that there can be some other factors available.

This

essay will discuss some other elements and the best one among them for a wealthy

nation

.

To begin

with, Healthy and educated

people

are considered to be the factors for a

succesful

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successful

nation

. To illustrate it, if more

people

are educated and doing jobs

then

their

lifestyle

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are far better than those who are uneducated.

This

leads to employment which helps to increase the progress of a

nation

.

Furthermore

, when citizens are medically fit and strong

then

money will be saved

,

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and can be used somewhere else

on

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the development of a

country

which will help to better the economy.

For example

, America is considered

as

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a wealthy

nation

because natives are

well educated

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, and

doing

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jobs.

Consequently

, a

country

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achievement

is depend

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on

their

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people

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fitness and

education

. Moving

further

, I think that

education

is the most important factor among others. To explicate it,

educated

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the educated

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person knows about the living standard and to remain healthy by having a

proper

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balanced diet, and how to save money which can be used in nearby future for

other purpose

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.

Education

provides knowledge about every task which is required

for

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tackle any kind of problem.

For instance

, degree holders having

an

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experience are earning huge amount of salaries.

As a result

,

education

plays an indispensable role in a

country

's development. In conclusion,

although

economic progress is the key factor to measure a

nation

's success

but

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other factors

at

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which

education

have

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a significant place.