Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what step can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?

Recently, some people say, living long term public is increasing according to developments in medicine.

Thus

,

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essay aims to elaborate on the advantages of the aforementioned.

To begin

with, traditional works can continue by craftsmen to live a long time.

This

is because mainly traditional works need a variety of manoeuvres by natured family.

For example

, representative Japanese traditional work of fireworks have gradually declined according to young nation apart from that town where the prestige of firework and an old man who age is over 65 remain only in that town by a TV program.

In other words

, as long as living that

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, we can enjoy watching traditional fireworks.

Therefore

long-term living has merit.

On the other hand

, the community can get raw historical

knowledge

from old characters. Nowadays we can search for google and can acquire a lot of

knowledge

.

However

, if the old guy living for a long, we can get

knowledge

directly.

This

is essential because the public cannot understand completely even if they had

knowledge

. So it is important for true recognising to undergo with real from like a senior human.

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, already we know that occurring of

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war attribute a lot of mercy,

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however

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these days are happening

such

as Russia's attack on Ukraine. So, if somebody

who

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has a relative occasion, they can appeal that result directly.

Hence

, considering that aspect, living long-term society is invaluable assistance. In conclusion, I reiterate that if folk

living

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more long terms, the crowd who

living

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live

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for now

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, for now,

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can get more

knowledge

directly

such

as traditional works or historical

knowledge

. Thereby, the community pass to the

next

generation

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and people can spend a more comfortable life comparing the past.