You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ............,

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Dear Wajid, I hope you are fine and how is everyone at your place? I am writing

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letter to inform you about the new house I have recently moved to. Two weeks ago, we decided to move to a better location as our building was very far away from my working area. A significant portion of my salary used to spend on the commute and

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it was a waste of our precious time. I have moved to my new home and it is very spacious and well-ventilated. There are four bedrooms and a dining room along with a beautifully designed kitchen.

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current apartment is within walking distance from my office and very easy to commute to. Our kids like the new residence too and are very happy about their new rooms at home. We have arranged a small party in our new house to celebrate shifting to our new home. I am pleased to invite you to join our family on

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occasion. The kids are very excited to meet you. Pay my regards to your family and see you soon at the party. Your loving friend, Muhammad Irfan.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

192 words

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