Write a letter to this famous actor. In your letter • give some information about the new theatre • invite her/him to open the new theatre • explain why she/he would be a good person to open the theatre

Dear David, I am writing

this

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letter to invite you to attend our new

theatre

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open

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opening

ceremony on behalf of ABC Entertainment company. As you probably have noticed, our new

theatre

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is the only 3D

theatre

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with

the

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apply

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advanced AI technology in Halifax. It has been built for three years and will open officially on 1st May. I know your hometown is Halifax

where

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, where

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you had been living and studying for around 20 years before moving to Toronto to start you actor career. I would be grateful if you could show up as a local actor to participate in

this

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open ceremony and deliver a speech. I know you are so busy, and if you cannot give a speech, I fully understand. There are two reasons why I

send

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sent

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the invitation to you. First of all, as a

local

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local,

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well-known actor, you have a huge number of fans, so your attendance will attract people to our cinema.

In addition

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, I know you just finished filming one of your movies, which will be

played

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shown

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around the world. Your movie will become the first movie to play in our new

theatre

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. If you have any questions regarding the event, please contact me without any hesitation. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Lily Liu

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Mar 15, 2026

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task response

Answer all three points in a more clear way. Say more about the new theatre and the event time.

task response

Use words like open and opening in the right way. Say opening ceremony, not open ceremony.

coherence and cohesion

Keep each paragraph to one main idea. One part has invite and reason together.

coherence and cohesion

Link ideas with simple words like also, because, and so.

task response

You answered all parts of the task.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear start and end.

coherence and cohesion

The order of ideas is easy to follow.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

214 words

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Write a letter to this famous actor. In your letter • give some information about the new theatre • invite her/him to open the new theatre • explain why she/he would be a good person to open the theatre

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more people travel abroad for tourism than ever before. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?