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Some people think we should stop building library because it waste of governments revenue. What extant do you agree

#people #library #waste #governments #revenue
Some
people
 claim that libraries are not necessary anymore, while there are many benefits
of
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it
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them
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.
Although
popularity
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the popularity
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 of libraries is decreasing, I do not agree that
governments
 should not spend revenue on building
it
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them
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. On the one hand, I agree that the number of
people
 who use
library
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the library
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 is decreasing. As technologies have developed,
people
 are able to access various information with a phone, computer or TV in no time. Many
people
 choose to surf the internet
instead
 of reading books in order to gain knowledge. In
addtion
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addition
, even book lovers start to stick with their devices, rather than
going
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 to a
library
 since the appearance of e-books.
Nevertheless
, I believe that libraries' benefits
outweight
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outweigh
 the problems
that
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apply
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mentioned above. Education is one of the most basic rights of
human
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humans
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, so anyone should be able to
acqurie
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acquire
 knowledge and information.
Library
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A library
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 is a good example that
provide
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 studies to anyone as
public
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a public
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 facility. In terms of revenue, it may look like
waste
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a waste
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 of taxes but if we see
this
 with
long-term
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a long-term
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 view, it would increase
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the governments
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governments
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government
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 revenue.
For instance
, most countries
where
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that
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 have high-level of education are rich. For the reasons mentioned above, it is clear that
library
 play the important role in society as education facility that gives many benefits to both nations and
governments
.
Therefore
,
governments
 should invest their revenues
to
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 it.
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