The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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the governments encouraged

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market .

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finding job is a cumbersome task for

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of job seekers are not able to work in the labour market

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population explosion

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faced by that.