Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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trend of people seeking

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alternate

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treatments and medications rather than visiting their regular doctors. I believe

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is a negative development.

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essay will be discussing the cons and pros and thereby

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my opinion. On

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of treatments and medicines because of the cost and time consumed in seeing their physician.

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, a patient walked into a hospital, he or she will

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through

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like payment at the cashier,getting their cards or folders,checking

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vital signs and queuing, just to see the medical personnel,

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is after spending money on transportation where there could be traffic jam sometimes, which is very common among the public hospitals,

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the private has less process

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it comes with an extra charge.

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can be discouraging for

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the health facility.

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of treatment and medicine can cause more

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than the initial

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, a client

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severe pain at the right iliac fossa which is an indication

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appendicitis, due to illiteracy or lack of finance,

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may opt for

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treatment which may involve buying of pain killers to subside the pain, it

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effective but on the long run, it can cause rupture of the appendix due to the delay in getting the appropriate intervention and it's a serious surgical emergency case in the hospital,

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could have been avoided if he visited the healthcare facility from the onset. In conclusion, the negative effects of alternative treatment

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outrageous and in

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cases,

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can cause death.

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, I think the health

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with the support of the government should help educate the masses about the dangers and

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of visiting their physician regularly.