You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, - Complain about the situation - Say why this is a problem - And propose ways to reduce the noise

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Dear Mrs SMITH, I am John Pearce, a student at your university with ID 8974. I am writing to complain about the
noise
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made by the new campus
restaurant
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. I am living at the university residence and I really appreciate de construction of the new
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as it helps poorer students like us to have a good and fresh meal at a low cost.
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However
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the
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is
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from 1pm to midnight. And there is a lot of
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during his open hours. The
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produced by the
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leads to many problems for me.
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,
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does not allow me to rest correctly when I am tired.
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, I cannot revise my lessons in a quiet environment anymore. End terms examinations are scheduled
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month and
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is a major concern for me as I need to be more concentrated to prepare them efficiently. To deal with
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situation, I suggest a review of the open hours of the
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. If it can closes earlier, at 8 or 9pm, I will organize myself to revise my lessons after that moment. Another solution could be to insonorise the building.
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will considerably reduce the
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levels. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, John Pearce.
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