Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

They say “Youths of today are leaders of tomorrow”. To become a successful leader of a country in the future, one must possess not only the ability to lead a country but

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everyone around him or her, especially

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the elderly. I

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to

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idea and will explain why in

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essay. In order to achieve

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kind of experiences, youngsters should have participated in some voluntary

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held by their schools or local town council.

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, the role of parents

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crucial in

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case because they are the role models of their children.

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, they need to take part as volunteers in any activity organised by

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community

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.

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they can persuade their children to get

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in upcoming events. There are plenty of activities for our young generation to work as a volunteer in our neighbourhoods.

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, helping local charity

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by checking the tickets at the entrance of the gate or by preparing some refreshments for the crowd.

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, they shouldn't get paid in return for doing

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of

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because all

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are not for money but for showing love

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the community. In conclusion,

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type of voluntary

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place during school holidays in order to be able to organise the participants more effectively.

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, by doing

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, it could elevate the existing strength of bonding among the neighbours and community.