"Nowadays it is noticed that cultural mixing is reflected within local cultural practices. Do you think it is good for our society?"
It is true that, nowadays,
people
with different cultural backgrounds are interacting with one another and turning the world into a small village. In my opinion, the amalgamation of different cultures
is a positive trend due to economic advantages and the propagation of religious harmony.
In my perspective, economic development is achieved when people
from all over the world communicate. Such
communication facilitates trade between different communities. Products specific / unique to a particular community or area can be exported to places where they are not available. Thus
, it helps in boosting the economy of the world holistically. To illustrate, silk which is extensively produced in India is exported to European countries. This
is possible only due to cultural associations between them.
Additionally
, I believe that religious harmony is promoted as a result
of the cultural exchanges between different countries. People
understand and respect each other’s cultures
when they get the opportunity to explore them. These interactions make them more tolerant of differences. Furthermore
, incidences of racial hatred and crimes have decreased in recent years. This
can be firmly attributed to the rise in cultural interaction between different communities. From my personal experience, I can vouch for this
change. To illustrate, cricket players from different cultures
now rarely hurtle racial abuses at one another because they have started playing for the same team in cricket leagues such
as IPL.
In conclusion, I believe mutual interaction between people
of different cultures
is a positive development because it benefits the economy and promotes communal harmony.Submitted by iamvithinninenine on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite