Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relation people make? Has that become a positive or negative development?
In the current generation, interacting and contacting
people
couldn't have been any easier. Not only you can reach people
in seconds, but they can also
be around you all the time. But with great ,advantages there are also
great disadvantages.
Firstly
, let us go back a few centuries to get an idea how
society used to interact with each other. Previously, when you wanted to go out with a Friend you would meet him so you can plan out when and where you were planning to do. Change preposition
of how
Nowdays
, you Correct the word
Nowadays
simple
just need his number Replace the word
simply
send
him a letter to see if your Friend whats to Correct word choice
and send
hangout
or not. Which is a really convenient thing for other occasions. Correct your spelling
hang out
For example
, asking a Family member for groceries, calling your work place
for being sick, the list can go on and on. But here's where the convenience could go Correct your spelling
workplace
to
the opposite direction. Having Change preposition
in
less
reasons to go outside and having a whole world at your hands made the Community very isolated. It made Change the quantifier
fewer
people
see normal activities really
boring because it's not Change preposition
as really
giving
you the attention and dopamine that scrolling through social media apps gives. How Wrong verb form
give
bad
did it affect the relationships? Change the word
badly
Alot
. Because you can reach out to almost everyone in seconds Correct your spelling
A lot
people
have seemed to lose interest in interacting.
In conclusion, Having faster ways to interact with people
doens't
make it Correct your spelling
doesn't
that
better Correct determiner usage
apply
Change preposition
than what
what
it used to be before technology. Correct word choice
than
Infact
, it made it worse. It's really difficult Correct your spelling
In fact
nowdays
to have a stable relationship due Correct the word
nowadays
how
Mobile phones ruined our generation.Change preposition
to how
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