A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: • tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her • explain how to apply for the job

#friend #job #country #company #sort #work

Dear Ann, It’s been so long since were in touch and I haven’t forgotten the wonderful days we spent together at the university. As you asked, I have se finds one job that I think will suitable for you. Software developer in ABC Infotech. The

company

is very popular here for the development of its website and social media advertisements. As you have long experience in

this

field,

this

job will help to improve your career as well as your subject knowledge. The

company

provides a good salary package. Some of my friends are working in the same

company

, and I came to know from my friend who is working in the same

company

, the working atmosphere is suitable for you. The

company

has flexible working hours which will help you take care of your kids. The

company

has published the vacancy on its website and social media platforms with the link to apply for the job. They may be asked for some of your projects and will be interviewed later. Best Wishes Jennifer Ramos

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

175 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

reputation
industry
duties and responsibilities
typical day
skills and experiences
job requirements
company culture
personality
work ethic
application process
job listing
submit an application
documents required
tailored resume
cover letter
relevant experiences
reviewing documents
practicing for interviews
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