Today, some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of female and male in every subject. Others believe that this is an unacceptable policy. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the present day, many people believe that males and females should be accepted equally in
universities
, especially in every subject. However
, some doubt this
policy idea. This
essay will discuss both sides as well as my view as well.
Many people think that universities
should have women
and men
in the same number. This
is because people may want to have a gender equal
society. As the former, more males are educated than Add a hyphen
gender-equal
women
which affects
the power of Change the verb form
affect
men
. Such
power makes women
have no choice rather than accepting
Change the verb form
to accept
men
's rules. For example
, they have to do Correct article usage
the house
house work
or if their husbands have an affair, they can do nothing. To tackle Correct your spelling
housework
this
problem, women
must be independent. They have to study in universities
and have their own salaries to avoid such
men
power.
Those who disagree feel that Change noun form
men's
this
policy is unacceptable. Their reason is that the policy has an
unfair criteria. Everybody should have a chance to apply and be accepted Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
for
any Change preposition
to
universities
and any Fix the agreement mistake
university
subjects
no matter what gender they are. To set Fix the agreement mistake
subject
this criteria
, it indicates an inequality system. Change the determiner
this criterion
these criteria
For instance
, there are many companies that recruit their employees without knowing their gender, age and house location to avoid a
bias.
In conclusion, having examined the two views, my opinion is that we should not accept two genders equally in Correct article usage
apply
universities
and subjects. This
is because we want an equal system for society. Moreover
, if we only accept those who get good scores, universities
would produce excellent students in the
society as well.Correct article usage
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
