Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Successful
sports
professionals
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salary is one of the most contradictive
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.
People
who are really successful in
this
area have outstanding revenues, so many
people
strongly believe that it is not normal that
sports
have bigger salaries than other important
specialties
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. Another part of
the
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society thinks oppositely that sportsmen’s wages are fully justified. On the one hand,
sports
professionals
could bring more
money
to the big brands by their popularity, so huge brands suggest
high paid
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advertisement contracts to the sportsmen.
This
cooperation could bring advantages for all members of the contract, companies receive revenues from
improvement
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the improvement
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of their products' sales, and
sports
professionals
get
well paid
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contracts.
For instance
, Cristiano Ronaldo’s deal with Nike is important for both sides, Nike receives a big star , who will be part of their
advertisement
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company , while Ronaldo has outstanding revenue.
Moreover
, watching
sports
could make us happier and sport is great entertainment for which
people
are prepared to pay big
money
.
On the other hand
, there are
others
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specialties
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, which are essential for
people
's health or education, which earn significantly less
money
for their vital job.
For example
, doctors earn smaller amounts of
money
,
who
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help
people
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lifes
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. According to
this
fact
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many
people
do not understand why it happens.
Furthermore
, many
people
think that
sports
professionals
are not educated so well to earn
such
a massive amount of
money
, because sportsmen spend a significant amount of time on their training. To sum up, from my point of view sportsmen’s high salaries are justified
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because they bring bigger revenue for their employers and are part of massive entertainment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial remuneration
  • exceptional
  • merit
  • talent
  • demand
  • entertainment value
  • career span
  • physical demands
  • justified
  • unfair
  • criticism
  • income inequality
  • societal priorities
  • sportsmanship
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