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Even though government have worked hard to bring about improvements in healthcare system, the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing. What are the potential reasons for this and what are long term affect

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Physical
health
 is key for all humans to survive in society as well as
health
 is a fundamental need for all of us. Improving
health
 care standards is not only the fact government need to upgrade to stabilized physical
health
 as there are plenty of other key functions
also
 in the line.
This
 may be the reason for physical
health
-related statistics decreasing in developing
countries
.
To begin
 ,
with
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 most
of
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developing
countries'
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countries
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 government is keen on political survival and they are changing their strategies in short term due to the political parties’ changes.
This
 is directly impacting the county’s overall development. The sudden changes impact mainly education and economic growth.
On the other hand
,
this
 is the impact on
country
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people
's mentality. They are not satisfied with the environment. they may be afraid of their future, and
this
 is directly impacting on overall long-term
country
 growth, Specifically, whoever possible
people
 will decide to migrate from developing
countries
 to search for a better future, and the result is again that economically poor
people
 may remain in the
country
.
This
 may cause to
further
 decries the physical
health
 of the
people
 in
the
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developing
countries
. As an example, the Latest world statistics indicated,
world's
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 happiest
people
 live in Iceland, Japan, Germany, Australia and Denmark. all
these
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 world's healthiest
countries
 prove the idea that you don’t have to be a rich
country
 to be happy and healthy,
Also
, some of the common denominators between these
countries
 are that they put their funds into
health
, education, and other social services which support
people
. When
people
 feel mentally and physically secure where they live, they’re more likely to be happy and healthy. In conclusion, developing counties need to give more attention to overall social,
health
 and educational developments. it is not enough to work hard only on one selected subject to see improving physical
health
 standards in the
country
.
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