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The given bar graph illustrates the amount of renewable
energy
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in the total supply in 2000, 2004 and 2007 for
Australia
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,
Germany
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,
Norway
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and
Iceland
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. The following details can be observed from the given bar graph.
Norway
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has the highest
percentage
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of renewable
energy
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in all the three given periods, followed by
Iceland
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, whereas
Australia
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has the lowest
percentage
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. In 2000,
Norway
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had the highest renewable
energy
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with 62% followed by
Iceland
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with only 10% less renewable
energy
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. Whereas,
Australia
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and
Germany
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had only 10% and 12% renewable
energy
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. Following a similar trend in 2004,
Norway
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rose to 4% of renewable
energy
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than the previous year and
Germany
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had a 5% increase and
Australia
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had a 2% increase respectively. Interestingly
Iceland
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had a 7% increase in renewable
energy
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which was the highest in 2004 of any country in the given graph.
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, in 2007
Norway
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saw a significant boost with 78% and
Germany
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increased to 17%. But
Iceland
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and
Australia
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saw a decline in renewable
energy
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with 55% and 9% respectively
lowest
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percentage
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.
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,
Norway
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had the highest
percentage
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of renewable
energy
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whereas
Australia
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 had the lowest
percentage
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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