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Some people are born to be a leader, others believe that leadership can be learned, Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People
 have a myriad of views about whether a
leader
 is born or made.
Although
 there are good arguments in favour of captain quality can only be born with, I personally believe that everyone can be a
leader
 after receiving an education. On one hand, some
people
 indicate that a person has the potential to become a
leader
 and can be recognized from his childhood, but some qualities are not able to acquire from learning or hard work.
For example
, some kids always easily assimilate into any group and become the centre because their personality, outlook and the way they talk are attractive to others. Of course, you can imitate the characteristics of a
leader
, but no one can completely pretend to be another person.
Therefore
, some
people
 believe there is no other way to create a chief.
On the other hand
, some
people
 argue that there are various types of leaders and some types are able to create artificially.
For example
, it is usually can see a company combine different teams and each team have a person to lead all the member of the team. Any
people
 who have enough experience in the same field qualify as team captains.
As a result
, myriad situations have many kinds of leaders and not all require skills that cannot acquire from experience or learning. So, a
leader
 can be made. Under
this
 line of thinking, it seems to me that some
people
 are born with good looking and voices with good behaviour.
However
, there are other elements to decide whether he/ she slots for a
leader
 of an organization.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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