Write about the following topic. Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays

days, lecturers think that when students study

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abroad, it

bensfits

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benefits

them in life. In my opinion,

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essay will agree that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. On one hand, one of the drawbacks of studying from abroad is

home sickness

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when teenagers start studying.

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, most

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the

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students want to study

from

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international Universities but

this

means they have to travel and leave their families behind so that they can achieve their goals in life.

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not only makes them miss their family members at home but

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also

cause

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sickness like depression since they can't talk to them any time they feel

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However

, children can use Skype or zoom to communicate with home people even though, it's not the same as face-to-face communication.

For example

, so many international

learners

use

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or Skype to talk to members from their motherland in order to hear from

hence

the benefits are more than the drawbacks.

On the other hand

, despite the above view, international

learners

get an opportunity to create new

friends

and learn about

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foreign culture. If

learners

get a chance to learn from abroad, they start creating new

friends

way

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of getting used to the environment and during

this

period, they get to know how other people behave culturally.

This

helps them during their academic period as they tend to fit into

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society.

For instance

, most of the children who have studied from international campuses have had the chance to easily get jobs through the

friends

they befriended in foreign countries. In conclusion,

although

learning from foreign nations makes

learners

get sick, In my opinion, l believe that the positives outweigh the negatives because pupils tend to learn more about different cultures and they

also

get new

friends

so l hope in future, the government allows them more

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