Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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benefits

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essay will agree that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. On one hand, one of the drawbacks of studying from abroad is

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when teenagers start studying.

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students want to study

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international Universities but

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means they have to travel and leave their families behind so that they can achieve their goals in life.

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sickness like depression since they can't talk to them any time they feel

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, children can use Skype or zoom to communicate with home people even though, it's not the same as face-to-face communication.

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, so many international

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or Skype to talk to members from their motherland in order to hear from

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the benefits are more than the drawbacks.

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, despite the above view, international

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get an opportunity to create new

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foreign culture. If

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get a chance to learn from abroad, they start creating new

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of getting used to the environment and during

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period, they get to know how other people behave culturally.

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society.

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, most of the children who have studied from international campuses have had the chance to easily get jobs through the

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they befriended in foreign countries. In conclusion,

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learning from foreign nations makes

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get sick, In my opinion, l believe that the positives outweigh the negatives because pupils tend to learn more about different cultures and they

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get new

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so l hope in future, the government allows them more

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Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people feel that manufactures and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of foods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people prefer to live in hot climate, while others like to live in cold climate.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.