Nowadays many people aim to create a balance between their work and other aspects of their life, however, only a few achieve it. What are the problems in doing this and what solutions can you suggest?

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schedual
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schedule
of their
work
so, it is hard to every to maintain
work
and
life
to
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balance
.
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, some
people
are easily manage
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both
part
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parts
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of
life
. There are creat manifold problems in
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.
Therefore
, I will
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explain
the situation and
also
give
solution
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this
issues
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.
To begin
with, there
are
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various
problem
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problems
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to
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with
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managing
work
-
life
balance
. Day by day inflation has
been
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increased.
Hence
,
people
work
hard and
doing
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do
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2 to 3 jobs
for
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to
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feed their family and
lives
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live
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a better
life
.
As a result
, folks can not manage their personal
life
.
Moreover
, doing multiple jobs which
increas
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increases
work load
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of
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both
companies and they can not
balance
their
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them
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both
work
.
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Consequently
, a person would be depressed and it will create health issues
such
as heart disease, diabetes and other serious problems.
Likewise
, these
days
,
the
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divorce case has
rise
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to
this
situation because
,
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a person can not give their
time
in
relationship
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a relationship
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.
For example
, in India, 55%
divorce
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of divorce
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case
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in
everyday
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. Apart from that 25%
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of case
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case
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of
this
issues
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. There
are
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also
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numerous
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of
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this
problem.
Firstly
,
people
are maintain
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maintain
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their
work
hours and other
time
spend
to
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with
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their family and friends.
Secondly
, everyone
make
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makes
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a rule in
the
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apply
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life
for their better
fature
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future
feature
that is
doing
work
in
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within
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time
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the time
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limit.
For instance
, the
reseacher
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researcher
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on two
group
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groups
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in that
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that
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where
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the company give
same
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the same
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taske
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task
taste
take
to
both
group
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groups
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and
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one
group
have 3
days
to
complate
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complete
their
work
and another
group
have
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had
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7
days
to finish
work
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their work
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. In
this
siuation
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situation
give
result
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the result
a result
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of
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apply
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that
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that person
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people
who
work
on
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for
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3
days
,
it
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apply
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was neither
accrate
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accurate
nor well
design
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.
However
, other folks did
work
with well
accqracy
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accuracy
and well design.
Besides
, when
people
doing
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work
with their
time
duration without any burden
that is
too perfect. In conclusion, it is important to
equillibrium
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equilibrium
life
and
work
-
life
. It is too hard
to
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everyone, while, there
are
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is
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various
solution
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solutions
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of
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to
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balance
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balancing
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professional and relation between family and friends.
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