Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is no doubt that

art

plays a significant role in

humans

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culture

. Many believe that

art

is

crucial

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subject for little ones, while other argue that it is a

wastage

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of time. The following essay will explore the topic from both

perspective

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and justify reasons and appropriate epitome. To commence with, it is undeniable that

art

is a medium that connects people with

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culture

and society which lead them to know clearly about the context of historians as well as

culture

.

As a result

,

this

instills

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a sense of pride and confidence in them.

For instance

, in India,

art

is mandatory to teach

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the

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primary classes.

Moreover

, it improves

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perception and

problem solving

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skills due to

this

youngsters learn to think out of the box, to innovate.

On the other hand

, many people argue that

instead

of

art

, other subjects are more important

such

as

english

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, science and mathematics because it gives better career opportunities.

Besides

, studying

art

does not lead to a successful career. It is easy to see that

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these days, most

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artists have been struggling to make a living from selling their

work

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of

art

.

Therefore

, these are some reasons why other things

is

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essential. In conclusion, it is true that without

art

children

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not know about their old

culture

and

also

art

improves their

problem solving

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problem-solving

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skills,

however

,

i

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believe that in order to become successful in future, one must learn other subjects

such

as science and

english

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due to better career opportunities.