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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, education and training are better solutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are several crimes happening all around the world. Most
countries
 use imprisonment as a punishment for
people
 who are identified as a defendant by law . Some
countries
 have good
facilities
 for
prisoners
 and some
countries
 do not contain the basic
facilities
 for
prisoners
. Most
countries
 try to rehabilitate and empower
prisoners
 during their jail time by introducing different pathways. There are a lot of
people
 who have committed crimes because they have financial problems fulfilling their daily needs. In my opinion
education
 and training provide the
prisoners
 to empower their lifestyle and prevent
further
crime
 in future and it will be a great solution to reduce the
crime
 rate in the country. In a
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society there are
people
 who are not aware of prevailing laws and regulations in their country. These types of
people
 need to educate about the laws and regulations that are relevant to them.
This
 can start at the school level as well as the community level.
Crime
 prevention is better than treating
prisoners
. There is a common saying " building one school can close 10 prisons". The general idea of
this
 statement is
education
 and training can prevent
crime
.
Furthermore
, the authorities have identified the potential of socializing the
prisoners
. There are some prisons where that imprison
people
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have committed minor crimes. ThisThese kinds of ,
facilities
 provide the knowledge to become a law-abiding citizen.
Moreover
, there are youth correctional
facilities
 where that provide the opportunity for teenagers to continue their
education
 while they serve their jail time. These methods help to make attitude and behavioural changes in
prisoners
. In ,
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conclusion I believe training and
education
 is a better
way
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 to reduce
crime
 rates.
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