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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant area of cities and towns .while other believe housing facilities should be built instead. Do agree or disagree?

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Air
 pollution on the earth is now at its highest alert so planting
trees
 is crucial to protect the environment. Some
people
 think that vacant areas should be a place to plant
trees
instead
 of building housing facilities, but others disagree. I agree with the former idea and will explain it
further
 in the following two paragraphs. Plants are known to reduce
air
 pollution and give us oxy. Due to human needs, many forests and
trees
 are destroyed and used to support human life. More and more factories and buildings appear and cause the
air
 quality to get worse. Without
trees
, most of the dust, CO2,.. will stay with
people
 for a long time.
As a result
,
people
 will be affected by the
air
 and become sick. If we continue building house facilities, there will be no place for
trees
 giving us oxy, the things that we can not live in if we do not have it.
Furthermore
, plants can increase
people
's creativity and reduce stress. Scientists
also
 proved that staying in a place with
trees
, flowers, and plants will help
people
's brains relax and produce much more new things.
Besides
 that, it can reduce the number of mental health problems for
people
 worldwide. Patients have been shown to recover faster from surgery when their hospital room has a view of
trees
. In conclusion, I believe that we should plant more
trees
 to protect ourselves and our earth. The
next
 generation should have a chance to stay with nature and enjoy the benefits of
trees
, not the wall.
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