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Solar energy is becoming more and mor popular source of energy in many countries. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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Nowadays, nations are shifting their extraction of
energy
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sources
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 from non-renewable to renewable types.
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, solar power is getting famous and becoming the top choice over other
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 of
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. Apart from its benefits, there are certain drawbacks
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. Certainly, with declining levels of natural non-renewable resources, we definitely need to expand our production to renewable ones. There are various options in
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 never vanishing type,
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 as wind
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, hydropower, solar
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, etc. In
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 category utilising light
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 given by the sun has always been in demand.
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, there is a huge range of solar-powered devices as an alternative to electronic ones.
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, solar lamps, solar fans, solar bulbs, solar cookers, etc.
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, solar cars are
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 available.
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 source of
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 is being explored because
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, it is environment-friendly and
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, it won't get exhausted by humans.
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, the petroleum and coal level on Earth has dropped significantly, and
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, we are suffering inflation in the prices of petrol, diesel, and electricity.
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, let's consider the other side of the coin which enlightens us about some demerits.
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, solar power is a clean source of
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 we still don't have high-end technology for its efficient conversion into human-utilised forms.
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, solar lamps take long hours to recharge than their consumable hours.
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, these products are expensive and it is financially impossible for nations to completely depend on these
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 of
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. Overall, to conclude it can be said that we still need great technological developments in renewable
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sources
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. It is high time for us to engineer cheap and efficient solar-power products because soon one day all the non-renewable
sources
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 will vanish.
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