A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Dear Sam, I hope you are
good
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. I'm glad to hear from you that you got
job
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a job
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opportunity in Colombo. I'm so
exiting
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to see you
,
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because we didn't meet until I left
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England. Yesterday I received
letter
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from you and asked me
our
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country
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environment to do work.
I
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happy to tell you over here plenty of accommodations
available
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. Some
of
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them are
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are
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apartments and others are independent
home
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. but all
house
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so
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are so
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expensive because
those
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are near to
city
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the city
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. I think you can
staying
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in which is my hometown.
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near to the city just 30
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far from away. Over here
house
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also
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is also
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so cheap and
best
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place
live
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.
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, over here
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buses and cabs
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are also
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available.
Also
trains
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available
for
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untl
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until
10pm. So no need
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about
transportation
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the transportation
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system.
On
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of the best main reason
to
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living here
because
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is because
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here people
so
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friendly and helpful and
also
can introduce some of my friends and can make relationships with them. See you soon. Best wishes, Harsha
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