You accidentally damaged a book borrowed from the library. Write a letter to the librarian.

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Dear Librarian, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing to sincerely apologize for damaging a book which I rent from you. I recognize that my

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have caused inconvenience and I am truly sorry for any negative impact it may have had on you. I take full responsibility for my

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there is no excuse for my behaviour, I would like to provide some context or explanation.

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, I want to emphasize that I am not attempting to justify my

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. I am committed to taking immediate steps to prevent similar incidents in the future. I understand the importance of books. If there is anything I can do to make amends for my

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, please do not hesitate to let me know. I am open to any suggestions you may have, and I am willing to take additional steps to rectify the situation. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter, and I appreciate your understanding. Yours faithfully, Elshod Haydarov

Teo HalimovThu Dec 12 2024

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Make sure to state how you damaged the book and what specific actions you will take to rectify the situation.

coherence

Provide more specific information in each paragraph to ensure each one carries a clear, distinct idea.

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The letter uses a polite and apologetic tone, which is suitable for this kind of correspondence.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately used, giving a professional impression.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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You accidentally damaged a book borrowed from the library. Write a letter to the librarian.

Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

tipping is a common practice at restaurant in many countries. some people beleive tipping a great way to apreciate service workers, other think it should be the responsibility of the boss. discuss both sides and give your opinion

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?