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some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in orter to be successful at school. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #children #homework #orter #school
Some individuals feel that youngsters should not be assigned
homework
 on a daily basis,
others
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while others
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 feel that in order to be successful in
school
, they must complete
homework
 every day. In my opinion,
give
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homework
everyday
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 can build pressure
of
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on
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 the student and make him/her hate the
school
. Many people think that
provide
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 more
homeworks
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homework
 to
the
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students will make them more academically
effecient
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efficient
.
This
 will build more information and skills to solve problems.
For example
, when
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homework
assigned
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 to the
puipls
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pupils
 daily
this
 will
encourge
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encourage
 them to work hard to solve it at home without the help of their teachers.
As a
result
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,result
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 they gain the experience to tackle problems in the way they have learned at
school
 and
this
 will increase the chances of their success in the future.
On the other hand
, there are many
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who do
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 not find it comfortable to keep assigning
homeworks
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homework
eveyday
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everyday
every day
 to
the
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children
. What is more, following
this
 strategy may affect the
children
 negatively in a way that
make
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 the
children
 feel always busy
in
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doing
homeworks
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homework
 and
do
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not have time to relax and enjoy the rest of their day.
Consequently
, the
children
 will get depressed and start to lose the joy of going to
school
,
becasue
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because
 they will think they will have
homework
 after they leave, and they can not arrange other activities during the rest of the time. To conclude
with
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, some people agree that the strategy of giving
homework
 on a daily basis
wil
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will
 result in
more
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a more
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 successful character.
However
, others find it more
harming
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on
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in
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 the long run, since it can cause the child to be always stuck and can not find time to play or learn new skills.
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