Nowadays animal experiments are now widely used to develop new drugs and test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause suffering to animals, while others advocate them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both perspectives and express your own opinion

Nowadays animal
experiments
are now widely used to develop new drugs and test the safety of other products. Some
people
argue that these
experiments
should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause suffering to
animals
, while others advocate them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both perspectives and express your own opinion.
People
have different views regarding
animals'
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experimentation. According to a few groups of individuals, the
experiments
at
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which
animals
have to suffer should be restricted due to ethical values, while others said that it has numerous benefits for
the
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human beings. I believe that
this
kind of research should be
prohibitied
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prohibited
. In
this
essay
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both viewpoints with my opinion followed by a conclusion will be discussed. On the one hand, the factors for which
the
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experiments
on
animals
should be banned. Animal
species
have
same
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rights to live on the earth just like humans. These are speechless and can not express their pain in words, and while experimenting on it, they have to suffer from
the
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severe pain and sometimes they met
to
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death
also
.
For example
, scientists are inventing new drugs , and in most of the
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researches
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several
animals
are experimented
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.
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Thus
, it leads to
extinction
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of some endangered
species
which will affect the ecosystem.
Consequently
, some other alternative should be invented to avoid these problems.
On the other hand
, new medicines should be tested on
animals
. If vaccinations are
firstly
tested on
animals
then
it can be beneficial for all living
species
,
such
as by
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on a
limied
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limited
number of
animals
, other
species
can be saved by using that treatment.
For instance
, during corona pandemic, humans are dying, in that
situation
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some treatments are invented and tested on
animals
so that
it
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will be beneficial to survive
people
of the world.
Furthermore
,
animals
are considered the best source for
reseach
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research
.
As a result
, for the safety of invented products,
it
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should be tested on them. In conclusion,
although
some
people
are in favour of testing on
animals
but
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I believe that some alternative steps can be taken so that they can be saved.
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