some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely.

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it is sometimes thought that sharing knowledge and ideas about science, business and education
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beneficial, others believe all information should not be given
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unobstructed
. In my opinion, I consider that
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,
businessmen
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can get
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details and teachers ought to spread knowledge.
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the one hand, some
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think that
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and traders who
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details and more info about their
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and
products
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often get mass
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engagement and I agree. In other
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,
people
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's engagement
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their discoveries and
products
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motivates them to excel in their fields which,
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, produces
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and better progress.
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,
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and traders generally apply themselves and work harder when
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the
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see
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of
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their
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or new
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.
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, being driven to achieve the best is vital in order to succeed later, when
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successful
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or traders
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must compete against
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others
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in the market with their
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or
inventions
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.
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, it is often believed that it is better not to
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principal information loosely. As
people
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, we often misuse valuable things
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are given freely, and some get jealous
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others
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success
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. With the help of valuable info, some notorious can start conspiracy against
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, entrepreneurs or even
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teachers
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.
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, one of my uncles shared his secrets of
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through Media and lost his
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well-positioned
business. Another reason why teachers should not
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lessons freely
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it could bring some uninterested students
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class
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which
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definitely not very fruitful. In conclusion, while
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may vary their opinions, I think
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, businessmen or even
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teachers
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stand
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a better
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chance to succeed if they spread knowledge
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and illustrate
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illustrate
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illustrating
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details about their
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or new
products
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.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaboration
  • innovation
  • collective knowledge
  • security risk
  • proprietary information
  • competitive advantage
  • democratization
  • sensitive technology
  • ethical guidelines
  • nondisclosure agreements
  • peer-review processes
  • validated
  • open access
  • regulated access
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