Some people today have argued that countries should interfere less in the affairs of other nations.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people have some arguments that
countries
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should not interfere too much in the affairs of other
countries
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. Because of the internet and
transportations
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transportation
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, it is getting easier and easier to communicate with people online and visit different places around the world. Every issue from
other
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another
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nation
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becomes everyone’s issue, people start to
concern
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about the
countries
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because it connects to our daily life and I would like to express my ideas in
this
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essay. In my opinion, I disagree that other
nations
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should not involve in the affairs of a country because most of the
nations
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have their own history to deal
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, Taiwan and
China
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always have conflict though there is no war in between,
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as a Taiwanese who cannot
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in
the
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international competition as a Taiwanese nation, it is hard for other
nations
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to recognize Taiwan
is
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a country.
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, the
America
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government always try to help to be the middle person to calm the government from
China
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to avoid
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war
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in Asia.
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, the business between the two
nations
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have
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bended
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bent
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since
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100 years ago, Taiwanese government have some programs to help the countryside to build the
argitature
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agitator
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and teach citizens
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the
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fruits and vegetables which helps the environment and
economy
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of locals get better.
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, it is hard if other
nations
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interfere too much in a country because it may get too much influence
for
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the local
menufactories
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manufactories
manufactures
.
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,
China
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has invested so many
Africa
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nations
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and some constructions in Europe;
however
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, when the pandemic has begun in 2019, all over the world
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strong
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effect because
of
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the
economy
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in
China
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crash
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down
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and always so many foreign
countries
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built their products chain in
China
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, they could not continue their business and delivery them on time because of the
lock down
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.
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, one of the
south
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American
countries
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had cooperated
the
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studied
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of vaccines test, and the results turned out that they had failed
and
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the local governments had to buy new vaccines from other
countries
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and
it
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which
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cost them much which made their
economy
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got
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go
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down
at
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the moment. In conclusion, though I understand that it is important to get
connection
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with each other, I think it is
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important to set some rules to follow and make the whole system balance itself because the
economy
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form
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a nation is connected with the whole
global
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globe
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.

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