Nowadays, many people have some arguments that
should not interfere too much in the affairs of other
. Because of the internet and
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, it is getting easier and easier to communicate with people online and visit different places around the world. Every issue from
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becomes everyone’s issue, people start to
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about the
because it connects to our daily life and I would like to express my ideas in
essay.
In my opinion, I disagree that other
should not involve in the affairs of a country because most of the
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, Taiwan and
always have conflict though there is no war in between,
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as a Taiwanese who cannot
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in
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international competition as a Taiwanese nation, it is hard for other
to recognize Taiwan
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a country.
, the
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government always try to help to be the middle person to calm the government from
to avoid
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war
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in Asia.
, the business between the two
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since
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100 years ago, Taiwanese government have some programs to help the countryside to build the
and teach citizens
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fruits and vegetables which helps the environment and
of locals get better.
, it is hard if other
interfere too much in a country because it may get too much influence
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the local
menufactoriesCorrect your spelling
manufactories
manufactures
.
,
has invested so many
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and some constructions in Europe;
, when the pandemic has begun in 2019, all over the world
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effect because
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the
in
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and always so many foreign
built their products chain in
, they could not continue their business and delivery them on time because of the
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.
, one of the
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American
had cooperated
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of vaccines test, and the results turned out that they had failed
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the local governments had to buy new vaccines from other
and
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cost them much which made their
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down
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the moment.
In conclusion, though I understand that it is important to get
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with each other, I think it is
important to set some rules to follow and make the whole system balance itself because the
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a nation is connected with the whole
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.