With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be oppened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?
There is no doubt that with the growing population,
people
demand more fossil fuel which is necessary for transportation and heating homes. While some Use synonyms
people
believe that we should get rid of boundaries for untouched Use synonyms
areas
in the World. I disagree with Use synonyms
this
argument, and I will support my view with examples.
Since the age of discovery, humans have transformed unexploited Linking Words
areas
into useful resources which means disforest or wiping out natural beauties. Nowadays, the growth of the population consistently increases, and Use synonyms
people
have more responsibilities than ever regarding the protection of the environment. If we consistently expand our habitat, there will be nothing left to use in the future. To prevent Use synonyms
this
, we have to turn to new energy sources Linking Words
such
as wind, nuclear, sun, and biofuels.
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In addition
, destroying these undiscovered Linking Words
areas
could be detrimental to the local communities living there, leading to the disappearance of their culture. While there are plenty of options to create new resources for supplies, using undiscovered Use synonyms
areas
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such
a needless act, and carries out tremendous consequences. Linking Words
For example
, most of the untouched Linking Words
areas
in the world are formed by forests, if we extinguish those places, there will be a risk in terms of environmental balance.
To sum up, Use synonyms
people
could find a solution for their increased consumption demand by turning to new energy resources. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, exploring and wiping out new Linking Words
areas
for oil and gas would cause serious effects on habitat and sustainabilityUse synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite