Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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day and age which is called the technology era, a part of youngsters allocate considerable

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with their mobile

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in their daily life. I strongly opine that the attraction to virtual worlds in these devices with the internet’s help is the majority reason for

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popularity. From my point of view, smartphones

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have an

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and pros.

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, its disadvantages outweigh its advantages.

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of all, attracting the

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of these devices draws children within grasp. The

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that they can enter with a click.

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, they can create and build a universe be enjoyable without limited rules.

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, their friendship in

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space is unrestricted.

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, in my country relationship between girls and boys is limited by the government. while, in the virtual

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and in the internet space, there are no restricted laws. Above all aforementioned points, the variety of entertainment facilities

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as different online games is the

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reason that absorbs the youth who spend a huge part of their days on their

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. In terms of the negative points of

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issue, can say the most and

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result is the isolation of children and choosing unreal friends

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of real ones.

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learn social skills and prefer to stay with

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tool

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of playing with friends and

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spending their

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with family.

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, they addict to their

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which decreases youth’s freedom and creativity. They cannot enjoy their

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without these gadgets. So, they become more dependent on them day by day.

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, they are not able to spend their

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without it. To sum it up, the attraction

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of smartphones is inevitable. Children should be educated to identify the negative and positive aspects of these devices.