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Housing and waste disposal are major issue in cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

#waste #cities
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Recent advances in globalization and modernization have resulted in cities being occupied by the vast majority of the population.
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 has resulted in various issues among which housing and the problem of
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 disposal are the major ones. I totally agree with
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 statement and will present my reasoning in support of
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 in the subsequent paragraphs. To commence with, the construction of concrete buildings has taken place in a haphazard manner without considering the necessity of the natural environment.
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, it has aggravated
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 pollution as there are no trees available to capture the harmful gases released and alter them.
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, it has been generally found in Nepal that the major cities
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 as Kathmandu, Biratnagar, Chitwan and so on are recorded with low
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 quality index in comparison to the villages.
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, mismanaged planning of the household colonies contributes to
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 pollution. In a similar manner, the management of
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 either degradable or non-degradable is not an easy task either in huge city areas. On a daily basis kitchens, farmyards, hospitals, and public places produce tons of unwanted output which makes it complex for the metropolis in disposing of it in the right place.
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, landfills
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 get packed within a month and with the slow degradation ,process extra land areas are not available.
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, in Kathmandu city of Nepal daily vast amount of
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 is generated but only a single disposing site named Sisdol is available which is common for the other two metropolitan cities
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.
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, the lack of appropriate and adequate dumping ,sites causes major problems. In a nutshell, due to the upward trend of population densities, housing and
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 production have occurred as main issues which result in low
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 quality and a lack of disposal sites.
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