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Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this? Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people?

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In
modern
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the modern
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 world, social media or TV have effects on society. Some
people
 often try to copy celebrities. They think
to look
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 like a celebrity is cool, but in my
opinion
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this
 could have some serious results. Most
people
 dream about a better
life
. So
that
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, they follow
the
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celebrities. They show us the keys
of
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to
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happier
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a happier
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 and better
life
 and they share their routines and philosophy. I don’t think they are realistic for most
people
.
To begin
with
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 different
life
standarts
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standards
 between ordinary and famous
people
, while ordinary
people
 work 8 hours per day, famous
people
 probably work less than them.
Also
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 famous
people
 earn much more money, so that changes their
life
standarts
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standards
. They used to using expensive brands and to have time for themselves.
On the other hand
, ordinary
people
 can not spend as much
as
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money because they barely afford
for
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their needs. If
an
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ordinary
people
 try to copy a celebrity, there will be negative economical results for
this
 action.
In addition
, I think
people
 are perfect with differences. If
everbody
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everybody
 copies
few
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a few
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 celebrities,
then
 they all look like same (same nose, make-up, style, etc).
This
 is not
benefical
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beneficial
 for
the
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psychology.
People
 could think, they are behind the others when they couldn’t catch the trends. Especially teenagers and young adults should be careful about themselves. Are they really want to get something or
they
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do they
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 want
because
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 it is trendy? In conclusion,
act
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 like someone, who
are’t
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aren’t
are
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is
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might be expensive and overwhelming. It may lead to financial difficulties and depression.
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