Nowadays more and more tourists are visiting places with difficult weather conditions, such as the Sahara Desert and the Antarctic region and so on. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

The main reason why
people
are keen on visiting
places
with difficult weather is that everybody
want
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to see something different. One
this
is certain
is
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that
people
have tired of being in the cities and cars that surround them. For discovering new
places
people
travel from all around the world. Take
for instance
It is obvious that to see pyramids
one
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of the exciting things
,
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when you see these architectures you freeze for a moment
,
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because these buildings were built thousand years ago and nowadays
scientist
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are not able to understand without technologies how
it
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happened. It is clear that it was not easy and thousand
people
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died over the years.
Significant
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number of foods and fruits were not familiar to
people
and how their
body
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allow them to carry
such
heavy rocks on top .
Therefore
it is worth visiting
such
places
. Another example we can talk about cold
places
like Antarctica. We can count numerous animals that live there and except
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Antarctica
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we
can not see them nowhere
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. Far from pollution, noises make those
places
more beautiful and gorgeous. It is very annoying that for sake of money
people
willingly kill animals and cut
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, they do not think about
future
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,
by
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acting
such
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way
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they
we
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are destroying our future. I hope that as soon as possible government must take
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consideration and act
certain
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way.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extreme weather locations
  • sense of accomplishment
  • delicate balance
  • ecosystems
  • conservation efforts
  • economic stimulus
  • harsh environments
  • revenue
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