Nowadays more and more tourists are visiting places with difficult weather conditions, such as the Sahara Desert and the Antarctic region and so on. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
The main reason why
people
are keen on visiting Use synonyms
places
with difficult weather is that everybody Use synonyms
want
to see something different. One Change the verb form
wants
this
is certain Linking Words
is
that Unnecessary verb
apply
people
have tired of being in the cities and cars that surround them. For discovering new Use synonyms
places
Use synonyms
people
travel from all around the world. Take Use synonyms
for instance
It is obvious that to see pyramids Linking Words
one
of the exciting thingsAdd a missing verb
is one
,
when you see these architectures you freeze for a momentRemove the comma
apply
,
because these buildings were built thousand years ago and nowadays Remove the comma
apply
scientist
are not able to understand without technologies how Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
it
happened. It is clear that it was not easy and thousand Correct pronoun usage
apply
Use synonyms
people
died over the years. Change preposition
of people
Significant
number of foods and fruits were not familiar to Change the article
A significant
The significant
people
and how their Use synonyms
body
allow them to carry Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
such
heavy rocks on top . Linking Words
Therefore
it is worth visiting Linking Words
such
Linking Words
places
. Another example we can talk about cold Use synonyms
places
like Antarctica. We can count numerous animals that live there and except Use synonyms
Change preposition
for Antarctica
Antarctica
we Add a comma
,Antarctica
can not see them nowhere
. Far from pollution, noises make those Rewrite the sentence
can not see them anywhere
can see them nowhere
places
more beautiful and gorgeous. It is very annoying that for sake of money Use synonyms
people
willingly kill animals and cut Use synonyms
threes
, they do not think about Correct your spelling
trees
future
, Correct article usage
the future
by
acting Correct word choice
and by
Linking Words
such
Change preposition
in such
way
they Correct article usage
a way
we
are destroying our future. I hope that as soon as possible government must take Correct pronoun usage
apply
into
consideration and act Correct pronoun usage
this into
certain
way.Correct article usage
a certain
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite