Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • apologise for not meeting him/her • explain why you did not contact him/her earlier • suggest a time and place to meet in the future

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Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. It's been a long time since we met after graduation. I am writing to inform you that I did not meet you

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month.

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of all, I would like to say sorry that I did not get a chance to meet you on the day we discussed before because I had to travel to the newly constructed headquarters, which was located in another city for an official visit. I know, my absence had bothered you and made you sad.

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, I can't postpone my visit to the HQ.

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, my itinerary has been scheduled indeed. Once again my apologies for

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. Above all the reasons, I decided to meet you again at my home. As you know my shrine is sited away from the city,

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, it is one of the best places in the town. We can meet

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Sunday afternoon for lunch. In fact, my family want to see you

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. So, let's meet soon. Hope you will consider

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, I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Ravi

ravikrishna045Mon Jan 02 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

182 words

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