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Modern Lifestyle mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much as attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

#lifestyle #parents #time #children #attention
Nowadays both
parents
 are working for the
child
 and to survive in society. And unable to spend proper time with kids
therefore
 the
child
 gets away from the love of
parents
. I strongly agree with the statement because many children suffer from mental health issues. To commence with,
Parents
 always think about their children and are ready to fulfil all their wishes. For the happiness of ,kids
parents
 are doing hard work to give them the best education and help them build
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. But they forgot about the love and time which is most important to give them, these are the things in grew up. In a recent survey conducted on
child
 mental health in schools in , the USA it found that 60% of kids are mentally weak and the reason for
this
 is attention not getting proper from
parents
.
In addition
, many
parents
 start earning more and more earing and they hire a babysitter for the
child
 to take care of or give to grandparents so that they grow in their career. Sometimes
parents
 want to live a luxurious life and carry forward to their children like they try to give the world's best education, and
also
 go on an international vacation trip and do many more things and these things give them happiness at the cost of taking away love and affection of
parents
 and getting detached from
parents
 once they start earning.
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