Sports should be made mandatory for all children as it helps in their physical health. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

children

's health issues

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increased because of technology. The child

was

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suffered

obsity

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obesity

because they become lazy.

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,

sports

activities should be compulsory in

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school

. There are numerous advantages that focused on

such

a

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activites

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activities

. So, I agree with

this

point of view and I

also

give

explanation

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in the ensuing paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are various benefits of

sports

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be made compulsory for all

children

.

Firstly

, when

school

should mandatory subject as

sports

which helps

to

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a children

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children

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health problem

such

as

obsity

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obesity

and

also

increased physical strength but

also

improve mental

states

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.

Moreover

, if

sports

activites

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activities

started

as

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earlier age like yoga, outdoor games and athletics,

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would be

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hebit

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habit

hit

in the future that it became helps

to

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people's health

in

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the

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an

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older age.

For example

, the sportsman

M.S.Dhoni

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M.S. Dhoni

started playing cricket in his childhood and he keeps his body fit. These days, he

is

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also

follow

fitness

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regima

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regime

regimen

and he become fit.

In addition

, when

school

should be made

mandatory

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physical subject, it would

be helps

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to find passion

those

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children

who started their carrier in

sportsperson

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a sportsperson

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.

Furthermore

, the game which playing in

group

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, it would teach

to

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skill

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such

as organisation, leadership,

team work

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and other more. Another, positive

outcomes

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from

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including

sports

as a part of

school's

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subject

is

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that

via

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doing these

sports

, they will keep themselves fit and healthy. Indeed,

this

healthy body will produce the power needed to fight numerous diseases.

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, seldom

does

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any

athlets

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athletes

suffer from cardiac problems. In conclusion, thanks to the influence of

sports

on improving

children

's physical status. I believe that it has become an essential issue to make physical education compulsory at schooling time.