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University students always focus on one specific subject, but some people think that universities should encourage their students to study a wide range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Usually, bachelor's and higher education
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 specialized in certain
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, While
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 will make them highly competent in these
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, they may lake basic information in other areas. Some say university programs should cover a wide range of other general
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 to the main course that
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 would specialise in, And
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 will improve their education for several reasons. Generally, there is some basic knowledge that a graduate student needs to know
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 his or her major subject,
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, math, history and social since. Since these
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 eventually will be employed and participate in the workforce they will put to use the information that they gain from these general
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. Excell sheets ,
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, are used in every office and need that basic knowledge of math,
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, an organizational skills course will help the graduate to become ready to work within an organization. Another reason is that studying other
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 will broaden the student's horizon in other fields. Sometimes
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 can find their true passion while studying other
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 and learn that they started in the wrong field of study for them,
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 will give them the chance of changing their major or at least will give them the chance of minoring in another interesting field for them.
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,
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 can start a double major in two interesting fields for them. In conclusion, in my point of view encouraging university
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 to explore other fields have many positive points and will help them to become more competent graduates. And
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 will reflect on their work performance once they join the workforce.
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