Education is not a luxury but a basic human righ and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

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IT IS TRUE THAT

EDUCATION

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IS NOT ONLY FOR SOME HIGH-PROFILE SOCIETIES. BECAUSE

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IT IS NECESSARY FOR HUMANS TO LIVE GOOD

LIFE

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21ST CENTURY. I TOTALLY AGREE WITH

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STATEMENT.

FIRST

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OF ALL, EVERYONE NEED TO STUDY A LEAST AT HIGHER SECONDARY SCHOOL OR STILL 18 YEARS OLD AGE.

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, THEY CAN EXPAND THEIR ABILITY OR CHOOSE THEIR CAREER IN A GOOD WAY.

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EDUCATION

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PLAY IMPORTANT ROLE IN EVERYONE

LIFE

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WITH REGARD TO THEY CAN MAKE GOOD FRIENDS AND RELATION, AND

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LEARN WHAT IS THE COMPETITION AND BASIC KNOWLEDGE OF THE MODERN WORLD.

FOR INSTANCE

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, STUDY MAY HELP TO FIND SKILLS OR HOBBIES IN THEIR STUDENT

LIFE

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. AFTER THAT , THEY HAVE TO CHANCE TO FOLLOW OR PURSUE SKILLS AND MAKE A GOOD REPUTATION IN OUR SOCIETY AND

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BECOME HELPFUL IN

SUCH

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A GOOD WAY TO COMMUNITIES.

SECONDLY

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, IN OUR SOCIETY, THERE ARE MANY PARENTS WHO WANT TO GIVE A GOOD

EDUCATION

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TO THEIR

CHILDREN

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. BUT, THEY HAVE ONE BIGGEST PROBLEM IS A FINANCE.

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,THEY CAN NOT AFFORD OR GIVE GOOD

EDUCATION

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TO THEIR

CHILDREN

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FOR INSTANCE

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, SOME

CHILDREN

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HAVE A HIGH LEVEL OF ABILITY TO INVEST IN ANYTHING NEW WITH

USE

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OF WORLD RESOURCES.

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, THEY CAN NOT DO ANYTHING BECAUSE OF LACK OF

EDUCATION

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OR NOT GETTING GOOD GUIDANCE FROM

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PROPER PROFESSORS OR

GUIDNER

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GARDNER

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, THEY NEED TO FOLLOW SOME OTHER WAYS OF LIVING THEIR

LIFE

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. IN CONCLUSION, GOVERNMENT MUST TRY TO MAKE

EDUCATION

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TOTALLY FOR

CHILDREN

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ALSO

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,PEOPLE DO NOT NEED TO MAKE COMPASSION IN

EDUCATION

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THEIR WEALTH . WE ALL KNOW THAT DRES'S CODE IS ONE OF THE BEST IN SCHOOL OR UNIVERSITY DUE TO STUDENTS CAN NOT MAKE COMPARISONS WITH EACH OTHER.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

287 words

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Education is not a luxury but a basic human righ and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

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